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Thrusting his sword down, light envelopes his form,
Such a bizarre look he has, his steps loud and hands warm,
Caring and considerate, yet emotional as humans are,
Something that I do not understand by far,

I do not carry a heart; I do not need one,
I do have a brain, focused on my mission,
I do not have bones or hair or blood,
But I do have eyes, those like the flower bud,

His form continues to breathe; the garb he wears is slack,
In this state, he is weak to attack,
Though the natural light may shine through the trees,
It is the glowing force beneath us that forces him to his knees,

Our contract is as simple in such,
That he does not think about it much,
But I do, every day and every night,
Though I do not have emotion, I have fear for this young knight,

I am the key that turns the lock,
I cannot accompany him as he may walk,
We are both flowers in a field; his is in his soul,
And has taken its fair toll,

I witness his flower, the buds of white,
How clean they are, how bright,
I watch him here, with my flower,
The very protection he misses, my power,

I will wait for him at this time,
Wondering, calculating, sublime,
He shall return to my side,
So I can resume being his guide,

I do not carry a heart; I do not need one,
I do have a brain, focused on my mission,
I do not have bones or hair or blood,
But I do have eyes, those like the flower bud.
I got inspiration for this poem from a piece of art work from Art-Zealot Thank you so much! I hope you like it! You should check out her work. Do it. Now. Her work is awesome! :happybounce: Check out the picture using the link here: fav.me/d6hyk34

I love how Fi looks, when I first saw her, I compared her to a flower, her hair and eyes looking like petals, not to mention her colours :happybounce: She's pretty.

Did you like this poem? Do you have time for a short story? I posted it on Halloween given the theme. Stone Tower Temple. Majora's Mask. fav.me/d6shnnb or if you have a Zelda poetry or short story request, I would love for you to shout on me. I'll be willing to give it a try. :happybounce:
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Soniclive Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
I like your poem! :D
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LittlewriterLink Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :iconslipperyhugplz: I'm happy you think so.
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Art-Zealot Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is gorgeous! Very much the kind of vibe I get from her, particularly in a moment like this.

Small note though: could you link to the actual image itself rather than to me? That'd be splendid.
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LittlewriterLink Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! If that's what you would prefer, I'll do it right now. I'm glad you like the poem. :happybounce:
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Zeliga Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful! :happybounce: 
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LittlewriterLink Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :happybounce: I'm glad you think so!
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Zeliga Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I indeed do :nod:
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OcarinaGreen Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

That's cool! :D I love how well you captured her character in this poem! 

I agree, Fi's really pretty! ^_^

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LittlewriterLink Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :squee: I'm glad you agree that she's pretty!
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OcarinaGreen Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha you're welcome ^_^
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